Gjertrud Schnackenberg

“Strike Into It Unasked” [by Gjertrud Schnackenberg above and below left; below right, Gerard Manley Hopkins]

Poetry’s “impulse, like electricity, crossing the space, leaves its signature.”

 

                                                                                  –W.S.Graham

 

No wonder that a flash of sparks

Spills out from what I touch—the LaserJet,

Brimming with static shock,

Suspends invisible electron-clouds

Across the laser-paper’s Radiant White

To print “The Windhover”

Electrostatically—

Hopkins’ creation-poem, spelled out

In powder-particle black sparks hard-hurled

From underlying fire

The substrate of his poetry

The veiled fire of Christ,

Suffused, incarnate, metaphysical—

And poetry is where

A bird of prey is teetering

Among wind-angles

Intermittently, a fleck

Amid cloud-rhythms, then

A flickering along the morning’s

Diamond-edged peripheries,

At such a height, it’s there—

Then not—then there again—

Without my realizing it,

Between “The Windhover” and me,

A space is opened, sparking, live,

And I’ve reached through it, unaware

It will flame out, will flare

In a split-second of brute force

To jump a gap that’s imperceptible

Until I touch the page, and instantly

Hopkins crosses the space

Without a step—

The wonder of it, that the briefest touch

Can instigate a shock that’s mutual,

As if sheer being, in and of itself,

Is equally as shocked by my existence

As by its own, and equally as startled

To exist as I am here—

Electrons’ phantom-loads, drawn off,

Reel back, and hurt me

With a strike as unequivocal

As if it’s understood—a law, a truth,

A given—that brute force alone keeps

For itself the power to disclose

The presence of a shining residue

Pent in the fallen world—

Gerard Manley HopkinsFallen, but even so, The world is charged

With power enough to stop the heart—

Electrons, always in the present tense,

Without locality or mass

Or temperature or light—invisible,

Yet capable of spreading in a flash

Across the surfaces of all that is—

Like consciousness lit

For a moment by the thought

That God is worldling, worldling now

And here—even the blearest things,

Objects we overlook, inanimate,

Inert—the sparking doorknobs,

Shining paper dust, magnetic

Clinging combs, the laser printer’s

Thermoplastic case—

Even the blearest things can stun,

Be stunned, are sites

Of inscape-metaphysics where

Materia has taken hold

Of “whatness,” “suchness,” “isness,”

“Hereness,” laced with fire of stress—

But even so, such objects only pend

As fragments of a universe

Awaiting a beholder—

Consciousness—

The outbreak of a hidden voltage

Stricken from the ore

Of Hopkins’ poetry: titanium,

The paradisal mineral

Whose lightweight metal sheds

The brightest, clearest-selved sparks

And most heartstopping firefalls

Before it lets its shining dust

Sheer off, go dark, fall back into itself—

Like humankind—How fast

 His firedint . . . is gone . . .

In an . . . enormous dark—I stand among

My own footfalls, the imprints of my soles

Mysteriously electrified

And vanishing across the carpet

Where I’ve trod and trod, as if my purpose

All along has been to try

To make it visible—the field of force

That hovers over Hopkins’ poetry

And brims at margins, boundaries,

White peripheries

The blinding thresholds where I try

To cross a space as charged and bare

And emptied as the room at 85

St. Stephen’s Green, where Hopkins left

His battered shoes behind, because we’re meant

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To come to God barefoot, and left

The treadmire toil there (“there”

Meaning “here”) Footfretted in it—dust—

And left the footfalls of his poetry

Behind, in disarray,

Scattered, and insufficiently “explained”—

(“Novel rhythmic effects,” dismissed

By literary interlocutors

As needless, odd, and disagreeable—

A later critic was “repulsed”)—

But poetry’s selfbeing selves itself

Without self-explanation, selves

Without explanatory power,

The way divine creation does—

The way the starry night

Appears—

And Hopkins, as a Greek professor, knew

The ancient word for the divine

Creation is poiema—poetry—

And, as a poet, he discerned

Poiema’s fire is rapturous and wild

And sudden as a talons-first assault

Out of the blue—Christ’s

Striking-in—and knew

That poetry is where a falcon stalls

Midair, prepares to jettison

The cloudbuilt, white

Wingbeaten falcon-footholds

Where contrary winds have brought

the falcon to its highest pitch

Of being—heights upwind

From which to dive headfirst

And upside-down, hard-hurled,

With wings pressed shut,

Its livid, bright, outriding feet

Drawn back and up,

As if a falcon’s feet are useless, weak,

Superfluous impediments

To raptor-plummeting—

Useless, until

The final instant of a strike

So shocking, so unguessed-at, unforeseen,

No prey on earth is able to prepare

For how a nearly imperceptible

And distant hovering

Transforms itself into a

Fraction-of-a-second mortal blow,

The instrike, talons-first, a heralding

Of chaos in the yellow talon-flames

And blackout-wingbeats mantling

The sight of it—the site

Where He consumes the flesh and blood

Of His annihilated prey,

Whose lacerated innocence

He takes into Himself, the way

The world’s wildfire subsumes

A single flame, to signify

No partial flame exists,

All flames are whole—

As He was first internalized

When He had selved Himself

Into the first and last

Immortal sustenance,

So now His prey is selved

As it becomes a part

Of Him, the Eucharist reversed—

As in a flash, a circuit, broken

Violently, is violently restored,

Its suddenness the signal trait

The Jesus emphasized, a sign

The gap is closed between

The kingdom and creation where

God is upstream, and flows

To Christ our Lord— 

“Yet I am idle,” Hopkins wrote,

Burned out, a socket scorched

Through its interior, without

A visible connection

To its source—useless,

Without effect, like poetry unable

To explain itself, or say

What good it does, or what it’s for—

A transcreation of the downstream power

Coursing through what is,

In a creation where all things

 Are brimming with a brilliant signature

That will fall, gall, and gash

Itself across the space it opens,

Crossing it—

The way a windhover’s

Headlong freefall crazes

The atmosphere with friction-speed

And turns itself into a shining trace—

A blowing-by

As rapturous as if creation

Were an end unto itself

And it’s enough that poetry

Strike into it unasked, 

And leave a spilling out of sparks

Torn from the firedint’s continuum

Before the strike—a glimpse

Of the creation, surging past– 

 

from The Paris Review

 

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from The Paris Review

       

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