Have you ever paused to contemplate the rhythm of life—how we start with hopeful innocence, only to be gradually marked by the passage of time? The poem presented here paints a vivid picture of this journey, from childhood marks recording every little adventure to the complex tapestry of adulthood, where we bend over backwards trying to please everyone else. It’s a thought-provoking reflection on societal expectations, personal milestones, and the inevitable contemplation of mortality. As we traverse this winding path from birth to retirement, the cycle continues, culminating in a peaceful departure. This piece captures the essence of our collective experiences, raising the question: Are we truly living, or are we merely counting the sheep until the end? Dive deeper into this poignant exploration by clicking LEARN MORE.
i was born
i was a kid
i had a mark
for everything I did
i grew up
got a job
bent over backwards
to please the mob
i got married
went up the aisle
had a family
in traditional style
i got older
wondered why
got a policy
for when i’d die
i got on
worked and worked
had my doubts
but never shirked
i retired
drew my pension
grandkids round
relieved the tension
i never woke
died in my sleep
last thing i remember
counting sheep.
Original song by JDG (voice/drums)and Chicco Fresu (guitar)