Unlocking Success: The Surprising Secrets Behind Getting Chapter Two Perfectly Right
For the next two and a half chapters, he recalls the events that led up to that point, but it’s written past tense. Near the end of the fourth chapter his reminiscing ends, with him coming back full circle to where chapter one ended. And the story continues from there, kicking back into present tense for rest of the story.
Can I do this? Is this acceptable? If not, what would you recommend?
It all seems pretty clear when I read through it, but I”m concerned that agents (or readers, for that matter) might have an issue with it. What do you say?
