Unlocking the Secrets of Time: A Captivating Journey Through Naduni’s Poem
Isn’t it wild how a pair of eyes can tell a whole lifetime’s story—warmth wrapped in the copper glow of sunset, a haven for a restless soul? Whenever I come across verses like these, I’m struck by this aching blend of passion and regret that feels all too human. You know that feeling when your heart races and your mind can’t quiet, tangled up in memories of what could’ve been? It’s as if those sensual, penetrating eyes hold not just love but the haunting question: if time were a river, could we paddle upstream and rewrite our mistakes, patch up our fractured start? This poem dives headlong into that longing, wrapping soft caresses and deep voices around the chill of loneliness—somewhere between a sigh and a whisper, where loss and hope collide. Fancy exploring this emotional tide?

When I first saw your
Sensual eyes
The copper of the sunset
I found the warmth
And assurance
I was looking for
I found a safe haven in those eyes
How much I loved those copper colored eyes
That penetrated my soul
And kept me awake at night
The eternal passion
Soft yet strong
The softest caresses
Like the touch of a feather
The deep, deep voice
The strong presence
Of you, you who I loved
The dark eyes melt me
I feel cold and lonely
The caresses have blown
Just like the wind…
If we could reverse the cycle of time
And get a better start
And not make the mistakes we have made
And make me yours and you, mine again?
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