“Unraveling Secrets: How ‘Carriage Hill’ Transforms Ordinary Lives into Extraordinary Tales”
I know we were talking about character introductions the other day. But we were doing so in the context of, “This is a bad character introduction.” The reality is that an AVERAGE character introduction is almost as bad as a bad one.
Here’s how Renee is introduced: “Effortlessly elegant and a natural beauty, RENEE KIM (34)…”
You may look at this and say, “Eh, it’s not bad, Carson.” And you’d be right. It isn’t bad. It’s average. Let me key in on a very important point when it comes to describing characters. If you only give us generalities, we will perceive your character in a GENERIC manner.
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