Hakiu Exchange [by David Shapiro and David Lehman, 1/22/03]

Piotr Sommer

DL to DS

NY Unstuck Exchange (Hi, koo!)

Three drops of blood on

a hill of snow: signal for

rebellion to start.

Two snakes intertwined

around a tree: signal for

couple to have sex.

One touch of Venus

and I will marry the world

with my stiff penis.

I know we knew what

was coming. Of planets who

can resist Venus?

How about a new

school of poetics? OK,

but what to call it?

Do you suppose these

haikus will be published and

read on a glad day? [DL, 1 / 20 / 03]

David ShapiroDS to DL

I have one reader

in mind, but probably she

will be glad elsewhere!

this is my haiku

to the addressee slipped way

beyond the world’s wake!

Call Poetry Mind

Call all else stupidity

Call squirrel there squirrel!

To pronounce squirrel squirrel

In last stanza change accents

Squirrel is still same squirrel!

Oh nominalist

Oh Zeno halfway there, let

her read us one day!

Here I am at school

In front of blue computer

Fairly serene Fool—         [DS, 1 / 21 / 03]

DL FelverDL to DS

Monocle, Mon Oncle

Good afternoon, my

friend. Um, how would you define

nominalism?

To define the word

in one haiku seems a task

worthy of your skill.

What did Stevens mean

by writing the “clashed edges

of two words that kill”?

This is my haiku

to the world that never sent

one to Emily:

In January

I always think of David

Shapiro’s first book.   [DL, 1 / 21 / 03]

David Shapiro with two portraitsDS to DL

Haiku no explanation but a vision of Wally and the Liberty Dime (coldsnap)

Only the word lives

for the nominalist — words

clash: no cold ideas!

Just two words breaking

in Stevens’ cave, no fire —

just words -– fireflies -–

Thanks for the memries —

the buried 15 yr old

now lost in old years —

Near Plato’s highway

Wallace walks with his wife, but

only words they say!

They go opposite

each other and are happy

Pigeons stay indoors!

That’s what the Times sez!

Pigeons indoors! Spouses! Crimes!

Criminals! Ideas!

Well, David, this is

not the complete Clash or edge

just nominal fee — !

I know that words kill

Because blind History taught

blind Homer they will—-

But haikus could be

little consoled birds inside

warm ferries flying–!      [DS, 1 / 22 / 03]

DL to DS

Time for one more haiku

In my sleep I wrote

haiku of wonder but then

the bird flew away.

Nor raven nor crow

yet that blackbird made circles

in the sky and snow.

No nominalist,

That bird was lordly, a sir,

Yes: Sir Realist.

Stevens and wife walked

to end of street and he turned

left and she turned right.

Two swords that kill do

so with greater skill than two

words that kill, n’est-ce pas?    [DL, 1 / 22 / 03]

Photos: (1) top left David Lehman with Polish poet Piotr Sommer; (2) David Shapiro (3) Lehman (4) Shapiro

       

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