Uncover the Shocking Twist Behind The Waffle House Index Screenplay You Never Saw Coming!

Uncover the Shocking Twist Behind The Waffle House Index Screenplay You Never Saw Coming!

This is the rare time I would tell a writer: TOO MUCH CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT.

How can you possibly have too much character development? THIS IS HOW. When your wacky, fun premise is contrasted against a “For Your Consideration” campaign for the lead character.

The two worlds just never meshed. In fact, they were always at odds. And that’s what I was feeling during each scene but couldn’t put my finger on at the time. Good scenes are supposed to flow. They should feel effortless to the reader. That’s not to say there shouldn’t be conflict or bumps in the road. But they should feel intentional and purposefully constructed. These scenes always felt like they were battling themselves. And the character vs. plot issue is probably why. Maybe there was some other stuff going on too but that was the main reason.

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