Unlock the Hidden Power of Point of View: Master First, Second, and Third Person Like a Pro!

Unlock the Hidden Power of Point of View: Master First, Second, and Third Person Like a Pro!

Tina wants Fred to go to the store to pick up the cilantro she forgot she needed for the meal she’s cooking. Fred is frustrated that she didn’t ask him to pick up the cilantro on the way home from the office, before he had changed into his “homey” clothes (AKA boxer shorts).

If you have a fully omniscient narrator, do you parse both Fred and Tina’s emotions during each back and forth?

“Do you want to eat? If you do, then you need to get cilantro instead of acting like a lazy pig,” Tina said, thinking, I can’t believe I married this jerk. At least back then he had a six pack, not this hairy potbelly.

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